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hey Lara if you're reading this then I hope that what I just wrote is worth reading haha. Oh, and good luck with contest! Keep being an awesome artist and writer.


sorry that I didn't draw anything haha...


I leave everything to you, think of this as... A gift really. Feel free to change anything. It's just an idea that I feel like handing to you, whether it's part of the contest or not. Oh, and skip to the end if you just wanna see the legit character description already.



This is JUST a short story I felt like writing for fun. It could also help describe the personality of the character.


...Shortly after dropping off Ena, Andre decided take the long way and think things through.
  "Well that wasn't half bad... I think? I still didn't ask her out but still... Could have been worse".  But as soon he rounded the corner he found just why they call it 'blunt force trauma' .
  "OH CRA-" whoever just slammed into him wasn't exactly a human wrecking ball, but she hit him just as hard as one. She looked completely normal too. But that's all he saw followed by the deep sound of hollow metal behind him as his eyes slowly closed shut.
  "Hey man are you alright? Sorry for slamming into you. Wow you hit that pole pretty hard didn't you? Well I guess that's what happens when you get hit by someone going 20 plus miles per hour on a longboard hahaha... Sorry" said whoever the heck this person was "Ouch... I'm alright, I'm fine." replied Andre. "oh awesome! Then let me buy you some coffee or something for giving you brain damage" at this point Andre didn't want anything she was giving out.
Upon further inspection he noticed this girl was wearing a black SnapBack hat backwards, was pretty cute, had long dirty blonde hair, and was carrying the longboard that helped to nearly make him a hospital patient...
  Andre and the kid made their way to a nearby coffee shop and on the way he found out the girl's name was-"Max, is the name. Nice to meet you Andrew!"
  "Andre."
  "bridge under the water."
  "Uuuh... Sure... So... this is an awesome shop... How did you find it?" asked Andre lamely in an attempt to make small talk.
  "I don't know. I don't even know how I got in this town"
  "uhm, WHAT? You don't know how you got here?"
  "Longboarding.
  "do you know where you're from?"
  "heaven. Don't you know an angel when you see one?"
  "where's your family?"
  "heaven still, they just haven't fallen yet like me."
  "what are you doing here?"
  "killing aliens"
  "aliens don't exist!"
  "have you ever seen one?
  "no?"
  "you're welcome."
  "so you came from the heavens to destroy the heavens?"
  "funny how that works huh?" Max said as she gulped the last of her coffee, ate half her bagel in one bite. The she sat back and burped manlier than all of Andres burps combined, and honestly, it made him feel like he failed as a man.
  He wasn't getting anywhere with Max and her cheeky attitude. all he wanted to do was just go home already. What was he doing in a coffee shop with a lump on his head and the same girl that ran him over? It couldn't have gotten any worse.
  "ANDRE WE FOUND YOU!~<3" shouted Annie scaring everyone in the shop including the guard dogs out back. Also almost shattering Angie and Kyle's eardrums in the process.
  "OH NO." said Andre
  "oh yes" said Max. "looks like your friends are here, LET'S KARAOKE!"
  shouts of approval sounded all around the café but the only shouts he heard were from Kyle and Annie. Angie looked like he wanted to commit suicide.
  "I hate my life" said Andre.
  "well that's too bad Bella swan, go cry to someone else. Get ready to sing!" Max said enthusiastically.
  Andre could only bury his head into the table and groan.




Some 'short story' that was huh? Haha

So basically:
Identity:  Max the tomboy

Style of choice: jacket, plain jeans, converse.

Personality:  cheeky, sarcastic, kind in odd ways, a genuine 'smart Aleck', really good with advice of she gives you any. Always wearing a SnapBack hat backwards...ALWAYS.

Appearance:  piercing green eyes, long dirty blonde hair, and uh... You can make up the rest? Hahaha.



Hope you enjoyed reading the story just as much as I enjoyed writing it. All thanks to your awesome story hahaha.
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